Queen's Wrath

Skill Set Name: Queen’s Wrath
Elemental Property: Dark + Nature + Fire. Dark element was included with the lineage of Demon Lord
Stat Specialization: Offensive + Defensive
Skill Set Information: A transformation skill that engulfs the user in flames for protection, giving her an extra 5 points to her defense while in this state alone. One she is no longer covered in flames, her defense stat will return to normal. During the phase to which allows the user to transform into a demonic wolf. A creature that stands to be 64.8 inches with leathery wings span twice it’s size. There is as single horn that protrudes from it’s forehead and marking on it’s back. Once the transformations been completed, she will be able to use fire at a greater length, buffing the range of the fire from mid to long range with the same damage and burn effect. To deactivation of the skill takes one post and at will, the demonic wolf disintegrates away quickly in order to reveal her normal form, leaving behind an exhausted Sarlia.
Passives:
- 18 meters blast radius after transformation completed, damaging enemies within the radius by 10 points
- Vision and hearing radius increases by 8 meters.
- Body radiates with warmth within 2 meters

Skill Set Strengths:
- Speed increases by 10% based off of Sarlia’s stats while the transformation is active.
- Sarlia is engulfed in flame for protection during the transformation phase. 

Skill Set Weakness:
- Exhaustion for 4 posts. This occurs once Sarlia reverts back to her normal form. She becomes fatigue, her speed is reduced by 10 points and Bolero of Fire’s damage drops to 2 points with the burn effect doing no damage during the 4 posts.
- Transformation can only be used once in a thread.

Technique Name: Bolero of Fire
Technique Rank F
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post
Technique Description: Flame shot from the hand (or mouth) which would then inflict 5 points. of damage to the other player with a burn effect of 2 points.

Please see the sections I made edited in bold, and my comments in Italics and make changes accordingly.

Sarlia Xul wrote:

Skill Set Name: Queen’s Wrath
Elemental Property: Dark + Nature + Fire - Just for clarity's sake, please list that your [DARK] element was included in your lineage upon its re-work.
Stat Specialization: Offensive + Defensive
Skill Set Information: A transformation skill that engulfs the user in flames for protection - Does this actually give a defensive buff? If so, list it under your strengths, or clarify if it is something that requires techniques to activate. during the phase to which allows the user to transform into a demonic wolf. A creature that stands to be 64.8 inches with leathery wings span twice it’s size. There is as single horn that protrudes from it’s forehead and marking on it’s back. This transformation allows for the use of fire after its been completed. - Are Fire-Element abilities only able to be used during this transformation, or are they able to be accessed in the user's 'normal' form? For the sake of clarity, again, please state this for certain to avoid any confusion.Deactivation of the skill can happen at will whether it be after the transformation is complete or until the end of the thread. - Does this take any time In Character? How long? One post to deactivate or instant?
Passives:
- 18 meters blast radius after transformation completed - Does this do damage to enemies? If so how much? Is it equal to a basic F Rank technique or is it a flat rate of damaged? Please state this clearly.
- Vision and hearing radius increases by 8 meters.
- Body radiates with warmth within 2 meters

Skill Set Strengths:
- Flying allows for a 15% chance of evading attacks - Due to the system we are currently using on Jeweled Seas, I believe this would work better as an increase to speed rather than a directly evasion-based strength, as we currently are unable to calculate percentage evasions.
- Speed increases by 10%
 -Of the user's base? For only the duration of the transformation? More information is necessary here to avoid exploiting or vague manipulation.
Skill Set Weakness:
- Exhaustion after two posts. - What does this entail? After two posts is the user reverted back to their normal form? Do they suffer a de-buff? And if this transformation is meant to be the primary focus of your skill-set, it should have a higher post-limit than two. As with everything else, please give as much detail as possible.
- The skill can only be used once in a thread. - Does this apply to the entirety of the skill-set? Or just the transformation? You may want to word this carefully such that you are not limited to being left without techniques that require on this transformation if you intend to base more around them.

Technique Name: Bolero of Fire
Technique Rank F
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post
Technique Description: Flame shot from the hand (or mouth) which would then inflict 5 points. of damage to the other player with a burn effect of 2 points.

Bump

Moved back to WIP per user request.