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 Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger

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Silvers

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PostSubject: Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger    Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger  EmptySun Mar 06, 2016 6:13 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger    Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger  EmptyTue Mar 22, 2016 1:29 am

Done ready for review! o.o//
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PostSubject: Re: Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger    Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger  EmptyThu Mar 24, 2016 9:04 am

Interesting skillset you've got here. I must say that offering stat bonuses to skillsets (especially secondary ones) is a slippery slope which may grow quite overpowered given time. I think at this rank a once-per-thread bonus could be allowed and perhaps later on (once your character has received in-thread experience with the art) then a cooldown and reuse could be allowed (Character rank A perhaps).

I'm fine with the added reach given your tribe,but just want to point out that you still have bones and the like, they won't function just like rubber :p

Chi Veil and the whole element conflict dealy is fine.

Copy Cat is probably the one I'm most worried about. I have a great respect for copying abilities,but they are very difficult to balance. As it stands you did a good job making it workable,but I can't allow that to be simply a bonus trait of your style. I think this would be maybe an S class ability (being able to copy abilities of equal tier or below yours). So, while I like the idea I think you should remove it and revamp it as a separate technique for your higher levels.

For Push Push Go is that just for pushing objects,or carrying them,or what?

Weighted Jabs should either have a reduced number of jabs (8 is a lot for a D) or simply used for a higher tier.Though, the rapid-fire exhaustion is a good counter.

I think Conquerors Acquisition is a cool move, just explain to me what you mean by his hand being "frozen". Is it crippled temporarily? Frozen with haki/chi?(because that can still be weaponized XP).
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PostSubject: Re: Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger    Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger  EmptyThu Mar 24, 2016 1:31 pm

Alright, made so adjustments and clarifications, if I missed anything, let me know.
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PostSubject: Re: Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger    Secondary Skillset - Conqueror's Hunger  EmptySat Mar 26, 2016 7:55 am

Alrighty, thank you very much for your effort and your patience. This looks nice to me and deserves my stamp. I'm sure we'll get you that copy-cat move at some point, Silvers Smile

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