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PostSubject: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:28 am

Name: Snow Red
Type: Weapon
Class: F
Length: 32 inches
Weight: 3 ilbs
Description:  The sniper has it's scoop atop of its back draw for better and quick scoping. It's all black and takes the form of a K-19 Bank sniper. It's bullets are 5 itches long. Where the heads are cherry pallet size.


Strengths: Used to snipe people from far range within it's class.

Weaknesses: It has no defense when a target is up close.


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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:32 am

Fix the grammar and spelling on your Application, until this is done it cannot be checked.

Prankster wrote:
Name: Snow Red
Type: Weapon
Class: F
Length: 32 inches
Weight: 3 ilbs
Description:  The sniper has it's scoop atop of its back draw. It's all black and takes the form of a k19 Bank sniper. It's bullets are 5 itches long.


Strengths: Used to snipe people from far ranges within it's class.

Weaknesses: It has no defense when a target is up close.



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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:35 am

scope and scoop is two different things so what's misspelled.. Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:36 am

scoops are like the glass in the scope
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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:37 am

Fix the grammar and spelling on your application, until this is done, it cannot be checked.


Prankster wrote:
Name: Snow Red
Type: Weapon
Class: F
Length: 32 inches
Weight: 3 ilbs
Description: The sniper has it's scoop atop of its back draw. It's all black and takes the form of a k19 Bank sniper. It's bullets are 5 itches long.


Strengths: Used to snipe people from far ranges within it's class.

Weaknesses: It has no defense when a target is up close.



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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:40 am

what's wrong with the grammar for peek sakes
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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 5:42 am

Fix the grammar and spelling on your application, until this is done, it cannot be checked, read your own application and do not bump this again until it's perfect.


Prankster wrote:
Name: Snow Red
Type: Weapon
Class: F
Length: 32 inches
Weight: 3 ilbs
Description: The sniper has it's scoop atop of its back draw. It's all black and takes the form of a k19 Bank sniper. It's bullets are 5 itches long.


Strengths: Used to snipe people from far ranges within it's class.

Weaknesses: It has no defense when a target is up close.



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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 6:09 am

K19 bank sniper do you know what that is cause I think you think I was trying to spell black bank and black not k19 black sniper but k19 Bank sniper ever heard of the money shot that's where that come from. Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 6:16 am

Fix the grammar and spelling on your application.

Prankster wrote:
Name: Snow Red
Type: Weapon
Class: F
Length: 32 inches
Weight: 3 ilbs
Description:  The sniper has it's scoop atop of its back draw for better and quick scoping. It's all black and takes the form of a K-19 Bank sniper. It's bullets are 5 itches long. Where the heads are cherry pallets size.


Strengths: Used to snipe people from far ranges within it's class.

Weaknesses: It has no defense when a target is up close.
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PostSubject: Re: Snow Red   Snow Red EmptyThu Mar 16, 2017 6:20 am

I removed the s I guess that's the problem or you just don't like how I worded it sooooo ill just wait for another grader to come along but Thanks but not everyone as smart as a English yale teacher lbvs.
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