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Hiroko
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 |  Subject: Yog-Sathoth's Profet Sat May 06, 2017 12:26 pm | |
| Skill Set Name: Yog-Sathoth's Profet Classifications: Master, Thinker Skill Set Information: Yog-Sathoth was once a god-like enthity who ruled space and time as he pleased; however, because of his cruel and savage actions against multiple other living beings, he was exiled from his reality and lost control of his powers to their fullest. The god-like entity was sentenced to travel through time-space with no control, eating any reality he stepped along with but being able to see all of these at once. An indefinite amount of time after he was exiled, Yog-Sathoth gained communication with a human, Hiroko, and gained partial control over his mind. Still being far from Hiroko's reality, Yog-Sathoth's power is not as effective as it could be, but the closer he gets, the stronger the effect becomes. Hiroko however, decided to take Yog-Sathoths commands as a blessing and in exchange, he gained power from this old god. Hiroko gained the ability of Sathoth's eye. He is able to see anything he wants and play with human minds to make them see what he wants. He is also able to partially summon Yog-Sathoth to aid him in combat. Finally, he has strong telepathic abilities which he most specifically uses for combat. Passives:God Smell: Those who have any relation with a god-like enthity or a god can smell Hiroko's aura. It's to be more specific, an unpleasant smell similar to death's itself. Hiroko can also smell other god related auras. This has a 100 meter range (smell increases the closer you get) and basically allows the user and others to know they have a relation with a god-like entity. Sathoth's Eye: Hiroko is able to change his eye. This means he can copy anyone's eye and even design his own changing colors or patherns. Skill Set Strengths: -Strong Supportive abilities. The user has the power to see enemies before they strike giving him a defensive advantage. If the target's speed is higher than the user's perception, this will have no effect. Also, this has a 10 meter range and must be seeing the enemy. This is done by gathering information by looking at the enemy's movement beforehand. -Higher ranges. Some of these techniques are completely supportive and have very low value if they had low range, which is why the range in these techniques can be greater than normal. Each technique with this applied will specify and will have a 1 rank incease in long range. Skill Set Weakness: -Many techniques can be countered by will. Since many of these techniques are mind based, will can completely eliminate their effects. More specifically, anyone with double the will than Hiroko is 100% immune to his mental techniques. -Low physical attack. His physical attacks with these techniques are limited to summoning Yog-Sathoth. This on itself wont happen regularly. - D Rank:
- God's Vision:
Technique Name: Radar.
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Intelligence
Technique Classification(s) Thinker
Technique's Duration 3 posts
Technique Description: The user gains a 360 degree sigh. Hiroko can also sense anyone in a 55 meter radius range (range increased to C rank by strength); however, instead of being able to see them clearly, can only sense their heat and siluet. It's Yog-Sathoth's eye who can enhance his eye for this to happen.
- Misslead:
Technique Name: Tentacle
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Will
Technique Classification(s) Master
Technique's Duration Instant
Technique Description: The user can summon one of Yog-Sathoth's tentacles from his arm. This looks as if his arm traansformed into a green tentacle which then extends to strke the enemy. The tentacle is 8 meters long and deals blunt D rank damage. It's able to break rocks and wood and bend metal on hit.
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| | Subject: Re: Yog-Sathoth's Profet Wed May 10, 2017 1:31 am | |
|  See my Bold sections for issues and Italics for comments/suggestions. - Hiroko wrote:
- Skill Set Name: Yog-Sathoth's Profet
Classifications: Master, Thinker
Skill Set Information: Yog-Sathoth was once a god who rules space and time as he pleased; however, because of his cruel and savage actions against multiple other gods, he was exiled from their reality and lost full control of his powers. The god was sentenced to travel through time-space with no control, eating any reality he stepped along with but being able to see all of these at once. An indefinite amount of time after he was exiled, Yog-Sathoth gained communication with a human, Hiroko, and gained partial control over his mind. Still being far from Hiroko's reality, Yog-Sathoth's power is not as effective as it could be, but the closer he gets, the stronger the effect becomes. Hiroko however, decided to take Yog-Sathoths commands as a blessing and in exchange, he gained power from this old god. Hiroko gained the ability of Sathoth's eye. He is able to see anything he wants and play with human minds to make them see what he wants. He is also able to partially summon Yog-Sathoth to aid him in combat. Finally, he has strong telepathic abilities which he most specifically uses for combat.
I cannot allow you to create a God for the site without permission from the Owner, if you wanted to keep the backstory for the most part you could simply allude to a higher power rather than naming a God or recreate your backstory for this skillset entirely.
As is, however, I cannot approve based on this alone: See below for issues with skills/passives as well.
Passives:
God Smell: Those who have any relation with a god or gods can smell Hiroko's aura. It's to be more specific, an unpleasant smell similar to death's itself. Hiroko can also smell other god related auras. - Please elaborate on what this actually is and what it does and if it has a range, and how it translates into your classifications as well.
Sathoth's Eye: While Hiroko can't abuse Sathoth's eye with stronger techniques, he is passive able to see in 360 degrees. Also, he is able to project Sathoth's eye. It's more of a 2 dimensional projection which can not be touched. This eye is used to communicate with Yog-Sathoth or to let him see clearer since he can anyway see everything. - This outright cannot be allowed as a passive, as an ability maybe but not as a passive - and as per the backstory issue you cannot have it involve a God that does not canonically exist.
Skill Set Strengths:
-Strong Supportive abilities. The user has the power to see enemies before they strike giving him a defensive advantage. - What range? At what speed does this become nullified? Please elaborate.
-Higher ranges. Some of these techniques are completely supportive and have very low value if they had low range, which is why the range in these techniques can be greater than normal.
Skill Set Weakness:
-Many techniques can be countered by will. Since many of these techniques are mind based, will can completely eliminate their effects. More specifically, anyone with double the will than Hiroko is 100% immune to his mental techniques.
-Low physical attack. His physical attacks with these techniques are limited to summoning Yog-Sathoth. This on itself wont happen regularly. - Same issues as above, cannot involve a God which canonically does not exist or unless permission is given by the Owner of the site.
- D Rank:
- God's Vision:
Technique Name: God's Vision.
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Intelligence
Technique Classification(s) Thinker
Technique's Duration 3 posts
Technique Description: The user is able to see anything in a kilometer radius. He can move his vision around through the area and can even focus in 3 points at a time (1 of them being his normal sight range). In the example of looking for a target through the area, he must look for him and won't find it immediately, in other words, it takes one post to find a specific target and locate it. This has no direct offensive nor defensive value. - I cannot allow this due to the range and utility of the ability at D-Rank. I could allow increased vision or the ability to track a target for a brief period, but keep in mind that D and C rank techniques are meant to be weaker 'beginner' techniques and are not able to be as versitile as higher-ranked techniques.
- Misslead:
Technique Name: Misslead
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Will
Technique Classification(s) Master
Technique's Duration Instant
Technique Description: When the enemy is about to use a technique or an attack, the user is able to play with their mind for them to miss. This can be used against normal attacks or techniques. In case of being used against a technique, this can only be used against a technique equal to or lower than Hiroko's rank (capping at B rank). Also, if it's used against a technique, instead of costing 10VP, this technique costs the same amount of VP than the mislead technique. - Again this is too strong for the rank of the technique, and I would allow a similiar ability of dodging a single non-AOE technique equal to this rank rather than equal to the User's rank, unless this ability was higher-ranked.
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