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PostSubject: task.. the beginning   task.. the beginning EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 10:53 pm

Task Name: The beginning
Task Tier: T1
Location: West blue midnight island
Task Details: The task at hand is to go to the local authorities building destroy it freeing the prisoners before they can get transported to a bigger jail house. Also to gain a bounty and get my name out
enemies : no there are no bosses.. the enemy is 10 Teir 1 rookie marines each has a night stick and pistols




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PostSubject: Re: task.. the beginning   task.. the beginning EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 10:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: task.. the beginning   task.. the beginning EmptySat Aug 29, 2015 12:55 pm

You need to make this not a wall of text.
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PostSubject: Re: task.. the beginning   task.. the beginning EmptySat Aug 29, 2015 1:10 pm

It is not a wall of text
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PostSubject: Re: task.. the beginning   task.. the beginning EmptySat Aug 29, 2015 1:14 pm

yes it is. It is one giant paragraph. Make it multiple paragraphs so it is easier to read. 

Don't just randomly split it up either, actually make is understandable and logical paragraphs please.
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PostSubject: Re: task.. the beginning   task.. the beginning EmptySat Aug 29, 2015 1:25 pm

Wrong one
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